To Edit or Not, That is the Question

The readers theater I wrote this week sounded good when I read it for the 20th time but then I actually put it into action today.  It was good but it didn't sound exactly the way I heard it in my mind.  Yes, it was time for a little editing.  I just can't seem to hear where it needs editing in my mind when I read to myself but as soon as I hear other people reading the script I know right a way where it needs a little help.  So, I say editing, will bring the script to life.  It adds a little punch to the story.